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 11 
 on: March 19, 2012, 08:04:23 am 
Started by UFO King - Last post by Yuu
Yeah, I guess I DA group would be better for now. It'd also help make the foundations of the webcomic.

Shame I really didn't manage to show any of the underlying complexity and tension within the Local Sector, as well as the nations themselves. Also, it does seem to be time for a detailed overhaul of most of my tech trees.

 12 
 on: March 19, 2012, 07:49:05 am 
Started by Bard - Last post by Yuu
Seconded with regard to Ea. This is the exact thing which tends to **** her off.

Also, here's betting someone in the team would've tried and eat him if they found about the jerk move he just pulled off.

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 on: March 19, 2012, 02:09:10 am 
Started by UFO King - Last post by UFO King
Then we'll push like we've never pushed before! (Wow, that sounded strange...) I'm not so sure about a webcomic unless it's really well-planned and we're serious about it, but a DA group sounds more convenient for the time being. I think coming up with a multifaceted, solidified, well-thought-out story is what this 'verse needs. Instead of random stories all over the place, we should establish a real plotline that actually focuses on characters and is planned out. I'm thinking not so much Firefly or Mass Effect (don't even think about 3's ending!), but rather a few different plots that eventually merge in some fashion. Like, maybe we've got a mep and an ilyarra forming a resistance group within the Yerxic Star Empire, and meanwhile some sombreron is trying to find out what happened to the nauceans on Beyon, then there's some USSS-type guys struggling with racial tensions in goonal space.

Shame about crazen. You shall be well-remembered.

Oh, and speaking of planning, we'll probably need another canon overhaul - only this time without the endless paperwork of shifting through archives. I'm thinking an actual overhaul, as in a new "incarnation". One that simplifies stuff, and reworks a lot of ill-thought-out concepts. We need more realistic relationships - it seems that previously, either two groups were super-friendly or they were at war. We need stuff like racism and controversy, things that reflect the depth and complexity of societies. Plot holes must be removed! I want to emphasize that I really love this universe, it's just that I believe it needs a better medium than a forum.

That is, of course, if you're all up for it...

 14 
 on: March 18, 2012, 10:22:01 pm 
Started by Bard - Last post by GroxGlitch
Re'vas would have loved bunting a gyro-round through his skull >:/

 15 
 on: March 18, 2012, 09:30:54 pm 
Started by Bard - Last post by Yuu
Dang, would've been awesome to get Hnangha on our side.   Cool

Also, Niyames is officially a complete monster. I mean, using an orphan, a weak, estranged and possibly psychologically traumatized orphan as a scapegoat?   Sad

 16 
 on: March 18, 2012, 09:08:07 pm 
Started by Bard - Last post by Bard
Niyames wasn't stupid enough to plug himself into a beta-version hnangha; dangerous, and if it failed everyone would be united against him. so he used a puppet, Agnasi, to enslave the children of the Larentili.

 the plan was for it to conquer the other four major nations, and then he would quietly replace Agansi at the helm. That last part...didn't work out as planned, partially due to a certain Angry daughter of his (still alive, actually), but Niyames is nothing if not persistant, and decided to wait for a chance to try again.

Agnasi himself was just a brain-dead orphan hooked up to a machine.
Hnangha was his lifesupport, still tied to it's main function, despite it's growing sapience (from the minds of the dead) and size (from the bodies of the dead)

I won't go into the Four because they don't really matter to this synopsis. Though they have a pretty important part to the plot as well.

Niyames would kill Agnasi near the end and start the procces to take his place. Hnangha would then fill him with all the pain he had been saving up for the last thirty odd years, to slow him down before complete takeover.
At this point, it would all depend on the actions you took and had taken throughout the story. I though of at least five possible outcomes. Ultimate bad one, You could fail to stop him (or, if you hadn't figured it out, perhaps protected him), and he would become a recurring enemy, devouring worlds with his Machines and Iavolg.

ultimate good ending, you stop him, freeing Hnangha and the Larentili, and the whole team and the Four get to live

 17 
 on: March 18, 2012, 09:46:12 am 
Started by UFO King - Last post by Withp Returnae
I think we should do both a webcomic and a dA group.

But, yeah, although this was a pretty awesome attempt to salvage the GSU, it was bound to fail. Its prominent, working members were reaching decline, and the only new members were short lived. I think it will take quite a push to save this.

 18 
 on: March 18, 2012, 06:40:48 am 
Started by UFO King - Last post by Yuu
Niyames was the bad guy all along: he controlled Agnasi and Agnasi controlled Hnangha.



Pictured: My initial reaction.


Why did he lead a group of spec-ops into the one place where the ship could get killed? Did Hnangha go rogue on him?   Huh



Anyways, I'll try and set something up within the week.

 19 
 on: March 17, 2012, 02:07:44 pm 
Started by UFO King - Last post by Bard
Thats...Pretty much it. I knew it was over, really, I just really wanted to tell my big story before it died entirely. alright then. And its not a beginning, This is over. Though it really did help solidify my ideas into full-blown worlds. And for that I will say thanks.



So yea, if you where wondering (you werent, unless your Yuu), near the end of that RP you where going to discover that Niyames was the bad guy all along: he controlled Agnasi and Agnasi controlled Hnangha. and hopefully you would have figured this out in time through various clues, and ultimately you would deside their fates.

 20 
 on: March 17, 2012, 09:39:29 am 
Started by UFO King - Last post by GroxGlitch
I'd say both.

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